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Yooo, this is dark but beautifully written and unsettling. Bravo!!

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Wow thank you so much Stanley!!

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DAMN

Similar themes, similar ideas, but this hits harder and the words are more expertly wielded. It's cool to see these two juxtaposed because it shows how much you've learned since you were 18! Don't get me wrong, both are good, but this shows experience! Nicely done and darkly so too!

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Appreciate that so much! I’m so glad that came across! Also, “DAMN” is probably the best review I’ve ever gotten so thanks for that lol.

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